Absolve me from my illusions
from my frequent illness of disquietude
How long can I put up
conversing with
God’s shadow
Clear me of its luminous clouds
Reveal the sun on my lake
with no reflections at all
Give me the chance
to look beyond the
unfathomable depths of my soul
even if it means
annihilation of my ego
even if it means
devastation of my reality
even if it means
caressing my worries
Give me the chance
to borrow your mind
just to get out of my own
this poem is beautiful! very touching..
Thank you for taking out time to read, Rabhya. Hope you visit again 💫
For sure Rahul! Your writing invests me totally and I’m looking forward to read more of your content! Nice talking to you!
powerfully spoken!
Thank you Nolsen! Hope you return to read more 🙂
Awesome.
Thank you Suyog! Hope you return to read more 🙂
Getting out of your mind is not a good idea! You know, when someone tells you, “You’re outta your mind!!!” it’s not a compliment! Hah!
Hahaha this was funny 😛
Beautifully whimsical yet stripped bare
Thank you. Glad you liked it!
That resonates so deeply — beautiful poem!
Glad it resonated deeply Mara 🙂
Very nice verse.
Art
Thank you!!