𝘔𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘰 𝘔𝘰𝘳𝘪
I’ll be quiet in hellish silence
Whispers of chaos touch my skin
I’ll be waiting in September
remembering my fading memories of you
Do you quiver in your fever dreams?
Do you still remember the fear of our end?
Or am I the only one
living a dreamless dream
of forgetting I am awake
I file away our images
in the cavity of my brain
The membranes turn soggy
amidst our rotten veneer
Your voice peels off all
the layers of my defence
My appearance is a cry for help
but you meet me in September and say
my mementoes helped you persevere
to not give in to a slow sleep of hell
and you ease me back to a hopeful life
𝘔𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘰 𝘝𝘪𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘦
Painting by Michele Poirier Mozzone
An intriguing piece. Enjoyed The Read. Blessings to you. 👍
Thank you for reading. Glad you liked it 🖤
Wow! This is a stunning piece ✨
Thank you! Means a lot 💫
Awesome poem. =)
Thank you!
Nice to see your poems Rahul! I am starting A poetry Review again. Send me a poem. It should be about the human struggles in life.
Sergio
Thank you Sergio. I’ll consider it!
Lovely
Thank you Nidhi!
I Love your work always. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you so much! Truly means a lot 🙂
Oh a lovely work! Loved reading it thoroughly rahul❤️
Thank you so much Ahiri. Means a lot 🙂
You’re most welcome Rahul 😊
How beautiful
Thank you!
Wow so nice
Thank you!
Nice
Beautiful! Loved it:))
Thank you so much!
How is that everything you write to I can relate and yet feel like an intruder all the while being an admirer
Always a pleasure !
That’s such a kind thing for you to say. I think because my vision is always to try and write about the feelings we all feel but don’t pay that much attention to it. Maybe it’s working!
It’s definitely working, and very well! And it’s not an easy thing to do, to have emotions bleed through the words you narrate. Thank you
:’)
Brilliant!
Adore it!
Mighty Writing!
Bravo!
“Smoke Words Every Day.”
Gonna steal that.
I Will give you credit of course.
https://texantales.com/2021/01/29/my-writing-self-delusional-facade/
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Interesting poem. I do not pretend to understand poetry as much as I wish I did, but I liked the simile. Will read more of your poems.
Thank you for reading! Really means a lot.