Sometimes when the rain comes
I ask myself
Was i wrong to love you?
Is this waning self-confidence
worth your little display of affection
Is knowing that you are mine
only sometimes
worth hurting myself all the time?
I’m almost close to the answer
it lingers in a thought between the
past and the future
but then the rain stops.
Penned well
Liked it
Thank you ❤️
Felt this…because I feel this
Thank you ✨
Loved this!
Thank you Sehrish. How have you been?
Good, doing just fine! What about you?
I’m great. Just settling in my new job. Other than all good.
That’s great!
Really well written. Rain always has a strong aspect in poetry. I have seen many people who write poetry make many beautiful creations with the theme of rain and life. Yours is just like that. Beautiful. Keep it up!
Thank you Anjali. This means a lot ❤️
You’re welcome Rahul! And keep up the good work!
Will do!
oh well..rain is a reminder for lots of things and it makes our heart profound. Lovely poem.
True. It’s a recurring motif in my writing and you’ve made me aware of that!
Well my name is a constant reminder for me .. haha
Haha true