We entered the tunnel, and our shadow selves were revealed,
the only light a small glint living in each other’s eyes.
Was it always there, or did the dark make a place for it?
We did not blink, and somewhere in us,
the part that had only known to find the dark in the other turned,
slowly, toward what was glowing
NaPoWriMo Day 28 prompt – And now for today’s (optional) prompt. Victoria Chang’s poem, “The Lovers,” is short and somewhat shocking, bringing us quickly from a near-hallucinatory descriptive statement to a strange sort of question, before ending on the very direct statement of a “truth.” Six lines, three sentences, and to top it off, a title that I think works for the poem but is only obliquely related to its text. Today, try writing a poem that follows the same beats: three sentences, six lines: statement, question, conclusion.
Painting by René Magritte

One response to “[591] The Most Valuable Thing in Love”
This was beautiful to read!
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