
When it feels like present
with no weight of the past
or the worry of the future
it was under the shade of a tree
with your hand in mine
when you called me mine
When it feels like present
when I slept in your arms
it was a night’s sleep with no dreams
even the fall before the sleep
felt like flying instead of falling
are we flying in love?
When it feels like present
it feels like summer
a walk on the road with earphones in
life jogs past around you
when you’re not inside your head
it feels like present
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This is amazing!
Thank you 🙂
Amazing work!!!!
Thank you!
I like your use of refrains
Thank you for the technical compliment. They rarely come by.
Lovely poem. Beautifully written.
Thank you 🙂
“when you’re not inside your head
it feels like present” great lines.