The secrets of the skies
lie at our feet
but we’re busy looking up
forging the present in
the hope of a future
Stuck in limbos of wanting to live
and the hustle of dying slowly
we find ourselves lost most of the time
when we should lose ourselves often
to find what we’re all about
[313] Untitled Living

16 responses to “[313] Untitled Living”
Beautiful. β‘ πβ€οΈ
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Thanks Lia π€
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ππ Really loved it… universal thoughts, eloquently and originally expressed.
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Thank you Lia. That’s kind of you π
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Beautiful!!!
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Thanks Muskan π
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“when we should lose ourselves often
to find what we are all about.”
How beautifully expressed! Sometimes we do need to lose ourselves completely to understand what we truly are…..
AmazingπΈπΈβ€
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Yes you got it! Thanks for reading π
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My pleasureπ
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expansive. Nice. Shared it here..
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/05/24/313-untitled-living-rahul-gaur-smoke-words-every-day/
hope you don’t mind. π
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Thanks for this! Don’t mind it at all. The poetry is meant to be shared widely for all the people to read and reflect π
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What a beautiful thought
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Thank you Shantanu π
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My absolute pleasure
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Magnificent !
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Thanks!!
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