[577] The Portrait on The Wall


My grandfather lives in a frame in the living room
He has been there since the year my father stopped being nineteen
The year he inherited his father’s job, his family, his silence⁣⁣
too large to wear comfortably⁣⁣
and no one to ask how⁣, and no choice to say no⁣
But will he inherit his smile?⁣
⁣⁣
My grandfather’s portrait never aged⁣⁣
while my father learned, slowly,⁣⁣
the way you build a life without blueprints ⁣
brick by brick, room by room,⁣ until one day I arrived⁣⁣
and he had to learn something beyond grief:⁣
How to be a father⁣
⁣⁣
In the night, he never listened⁣⁣
In the morning, he let me talk⁣⁣
That was how he built his walls⁣
giving in to his grief in the night⁣
and finding the strength ⁣
in the morning light⁣

Every morning, I passed my grandfather ⁣
wondering about an alternate reality⁣
But his Mona Lisa smile suggested ⁣
he had always known how⁣
this particular reality would unravel ⁣
looking at us from God’s eyes⁣
⁣⁣
Then I turned nineteen⁣ and told my father⁣
I wanted to say the unspoken in poems, ⁣
or something equally impractical,⁣ ⁣
maybe movies, maybe both⁣
and my father, who had never been asked,⁣⁣
who never had the luxury of wanting,⁣⁣
looked at me for a long moment⁣ and said yes⁣⁣
⁣⁣
The man on the wall kept smiling⁣⁣
It seems he had known all along⁣⁣
And now I see my father⁣⁣
finally inheriting ⁣
his father’s smile⁣⁣
when he sees mine


NaPoWriMo Day 12 – Finally, here’s today’s (optional) prompt. Amarjit Chandan has a pretty wild biography, but his poetry is often focused on place and memory – with his hometown of Nakodar appearing repeatedly. His poem “Uncle Mohan Singh” recounts, with a sort of dreaminess, a memory of the titular uncle playing the accompaniment to a silent film. Today, we’d like to challenge you to write your own poem that recounts a memory of a beloved relative, and something they did that echoes through your thoughts today.

5 responses to “[577] The Portrait on The Wall”

  1. This is a stunning poem. The frame as both picture frame and prison; the inheritance of silence as something “too large to wear comfortably”; the way grief becomes a nocturnal ritual while strength arrives with morning light—these images are devastating and precise.

    The structural parallel is especially moving: the grandfather frozen at an unchanging age, the father learning fatherhood “without blueprints,” and then you at nineteen—the same age your father “stopped” being—choosing the unspoken as your medium. That’s the rupture across generations.

    And the smile becomes the real inheritance: not the job, not the silence, but the quiet knowing that passes from grandfather to father to you, activated finally when your father sees you receiving recognition. The Mona Lisa comparison is perfect—enigmatic, patient, aware.

    The final line grounds everything in the ordinary miraculous: Rahul. That’s where legacy lives now—not in frames, but in small permissions granted, small recognitions shared.

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  2. A beautiful tribute that acts as a prism – reflecting multiple points of view at different times in the speaker’s life. The grandfather’s portrait acts like a fulcrum, or the focal point where the poem starts and brings itself to an end, leaving the reader with a warm image of the legacy of a smile.

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