I look at a peacock fly by the window, and I wait
His senior tells him to push harder
He pauses long before he replies
smiles before he sees me
enters the room so warmly
He is negotiating with me
The number between us
like a question
neither of us wants to answer first
Then he pauses
not from weakness
but from somewhere
The corporate boss cannot follow
His eyes catch the peacock’s green
amidst the grey concrete towers
he comes back in a moment
that felt like eternity
to a room that forgot eternity existed
We both look at each
a connection we both can’t name
then he names his price
I say yes
before I know why
The peacock flew out of sight
only after we shook hands
It had done its job
We both saw the shrine
NaPoWriMo Day 17 – And now for our (optional) prompt! Sergio Raimondi’s poem, “Today Matsuo Basho Cooks,” plays on the following haiku by (you guessed it), Matsuo Basho:
Crimson pepper pod!
Add two pairs of wings, and look—
darting dragonfly.
For today’s challenge, write a poem in which you respond to a favorite poem by another poet.
My poem is a response to the silent monk of the mountains, where I meet the monk in a glimpse of shared moments. The poem is about the shared moment where we both notice something ethereal like a peacock flying in the cityscape.


One response to “[582] Seeing The Unseen”
A new poet friend: Greg Valitchka
“i have scars that look like wrinkles
and wrinkles that look like scars…
i have love that looks like despair
and despair that looks like love
embraces leap from a heart of gold
into currents and canals
into the flow of hope’s downstream”
my response :
i have eyes that look like pools
and pools that look for eyes
i have friends who look like foes
and foes who look like friends
confusion rears its ugly head
confusion gives way to understanding
eyes pool tears of understanding
it’s what friends and foe need most