[591] The Most Valuable Thing in Love

We entered the tunnel, and our shadow selves were revealed, ⁣
the only light a small glint living in each other’s eyes. ⁣
Was it always there, or did the dark make a place for it? ⁣
We did not blink, and somewhere in us, ⁣
the part that had only known to find the dark in the other turned, ⁣
slowly, toward what was glowing


NaPoWriMo Day 28 prompt – And now for today’s (optional) prompt. Victoria Chang’s poem, “The Lovers,” is short and somewhat shocking, bringing us quickly from a near-hallucinatory descriptive statement to a strange sort of question, before ending on the very direct statement of a “truth.” Six lines, three sentences, and to top it off, a title that I think works for the poem but is only obliquely related to its text. Today, try writing a poem that follows the same beats: three sentences, six lines: statement, question, conclusion.


Painting by René Magritte

3 responses to “[591] The Most Valuable Thing in Love”

  1. Social media as is deceptive
    As a hissing, coiled snake.
    At any minute do you think
    It will uncoil and strike?
    Yes, but its strike will unleash
    Questionable details distorting Truth.

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