She speaks in fantasies
upon the flights of reality
Earnest talk with a
smile at the end to make it unreal
I know she wants to mean it
and make her dreams a reality
She needs someone to push her
Leap of faith awaits her
But she can’t find the energy
inside her so she gazes outside
to find me in the streets
Our eyes lock
Can we unlock the potential
that the individual cannot see
The relation between the two
is nothing unless we are
making each other learn
and unlearn our calamities
She waits upon a cliff
and feels inability inside
My words they speak into her eyes
to guide her into the light
She finally believes in her potential
and doesn’t feel my need
for me to go and nudge her
so I turn my back to feel
We stand there in silence
An abrupt noise creeps
She is falling and she is falling
but she finally finds her feet
She is realised and she is reborn
taking her first flight of fancy
Beautiful 🥰
Thank you 🖤
I like it. But what do you get out of the deal?
Sometimes we should we fine with not getting something out of something. If it helps someone out, that’s enough 🙂
Agree.
♥️
🖤
Amazing ❤️
Thank you 😊
Well…🤙
🖤
Beautiful creation.
Thank you so much. 🖤
I love the first stanza. It is so real.
Glad you liked it 🖤
Good writing and moonlight 🌙 🌝
Thank you Siva 🖤
Very beautiful
Thank you!
That was a beautifull piece!!
But what do we take from it? I mean the end result or something?
What we take is happiness of the fact that we helped someone else take ownership of their story and realised the way to fulfil their potential.
Thank you Khushi! What do you think about the end result?
Well.. what I thought she was introspecting..like it was her inner self, her will that motivated her.
Yes, you’re absolutely right there. You are a great reader!
Thanks ☺️
Excellent! Loved it.
Thank you!
This is amazing, such beautiful writing 🖤
Thank you so much!
Beautiful.
Thank you Sheri 🙂
You’re very welcome. 😊
Very nice
Thank you Alex!
By Godjust relates me until I don’t give any boy outside my window para just that!! Too good at writing you’re, I’ll definitely read your every work day by day indeed. Your poems are also one of the good things around (after reading I felt this). Well never stop writing.
Get*
And yes I’ve saved this like bookmarked it cuz I loved it too much so adding to my favorite list.
Means a lot :’)
This poem speaks to me. I love it ❤️
I’m so glad it did 🖤
nice
Thanks!