I water my desert pain
with your name
Your sun flare gaze
lights up auroras
But in a city
the stars only dazzle in
dreams
You find my light
waning by your side
Premonitions come to you as deja vu
Realisations of changing feelings
You leave my orbit to create
your own planet to watch my
supernova
I happened to check Feedspot’s top 100 poetry blogs of 2021 as a blogger was featured there and I found my blog featured there as well for 2nd year in a row. They’ve used JanBeek‘s picture with my blog’s name (at no.36), which I don’t mind since she’s been with me on my journey of blogging for so long. Fun fact: She’s also the top commenter here, so thank you so much! Without the readers who’ve stayed and read me for this long, I am nothing.
So thanks to those who stayed and those who will stay here for longer. I promise not to disappoint you and try to raise the level of my writing and knowledge in years to come.
To more writing and more reading! ❤️
Smoke words every day. 
19 responses to “[466] Space Love + Featured in Top 100 Poetry Blogs (2021)”
what a lovely poem, and, of course, mazal tov!
❤
David
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Thank you David! Really appreciate it 🙂
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This poem is so beautiful! What a stunning piece, you intertwined space and love so magically!!! I absolutely love it and its dreamy flow!!! And congratulations!!! You most definitely deserve it!!! I’m sure there’s much more to come, my friend!! Keep shining 🤗✨🖤
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Thank you so much Ace! Yes, I will try to limit my writing in space now to explore more metaphors closer to earth now 😛
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Yes more writing definitely.
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Always and forever!
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you never disappoint, and I don’t see how you ever could– with words like these, I will be a repeat reader here. So glad I found your blog. My takeaway each time is huge. Thanks. Omedetto, my friend.
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Thank you so much Selma. Really means a lot coming from you 🙂
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Welcome to the blending of JanBeek/Rahul!! What fun!! ❤ Like you, I am trying to "raise the level of my writing and knowledge in years to come." It's an exciting journey. I'm glad we are traveling this WordPress road together ❤
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Haha so much fun! I’m glad as well. To onwards and upwards 🙂
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❤
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excellent poem n poems n wishing u fruitful writing ahead
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Thank you so much. Appreciate it!
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Congratulations 🎉
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Thank you!! 💫
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If you think big you will get big
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True that!
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“I water my desert pain
with your name ”
This is so visceral I can feel it. It drew me into the remainder. I like this one particularly, as I like all of Yours generally.
Undoubtedly you are talented. Do not let the desert sand, the grit of it,blind you to an oasis of loving.
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