Everything he saw
merged before his eyes
But before it merged
Everything was distant
Lost in his inner world,
he stood by the riverside
Holding the deadliest sword
known to mankind
A boat arrives and he sits
The boatman is smiling
The warrior is smiling
So he asks ‘Why?’
The warrior recollects horrors
He reflects on his inner demons
He thinks he slayed them while
slaying millions, the boatman smiled
So again, he asked ‘Why?’
The boatman asked him to listen,
The splash of the river
The clean air in his nose
The taste of the tea in his mouth
Everything is connected, he says
The warrior draws his sword
He knew he didn’t feel this…bliss
All he felt was victory over others
All he feels now is defeat
to not be able to feel what the boatman felt
The boatman smiled more
He asked him to be still and really
listen, see, touch, hear and taste life
The warrior who mastered all emotions
lacked the will to stay still but he tried
He saw the clouds moving like his thoughts
The river flowing like his bloody veins
The flowers blooming like his endless desires
And the taste of tea reviving his lost soul
A finger touches the point
between his eyebrows
and everything he is seeing
merges before his eyes
The connection between everything visible
The souls he killed, part of his own
The power he felt, a weakness inside
The sword that slayed millions needed one more to die
As the realization dawns
The warrior’s heart grew heavy
In a final act of seeking redemption,
He raised the deadly sword to his own chest
Blood mingled with the river’s current
A crimson offering for his past deeds
And as his body splashed into the depths below,
He embraced the oneness he never sought
The river welcomed him,
The embrace gentle yet violent
The boatman watched him merge
into a moment of rare surrender
And as the ripples faded,
And the river continued its eternal dance
The warrior’s spirit merged with the flow,
A silent surrender to the interconnectedness of all things
NaPoWriMo Day 13: Start by creating a “word bank” of ten simple words. They should only have one or two syllables apiece. Five should correspond to each of the five senses (i.e., one word that is a thing you can see, one word that is a type of sound, one word that is a thing you can taste, etc). Three more should be concrete nouns of whatever character you choose (i.e., “bridge,” “sun,” “airplane,” “cat”), and the last two should be verbs. Now, come up with rhymes for each of your ten words. (If you’re having trouble coming up with rhymes, the wonderful Rhymezone is at your service). Use your expanded word-bank, with rhymes, as the seeds for your poem. Your effort doesn’t actually have to rhyme in the sense of having each line end with a rhymed word, but try to use as much soundplay in your poem as possible.
My wordbank: river, boat, splash, clean air, tea, flower, clouds, sword, reflect, flow.

2 responses to “[547] The Deadliest Sword”
This is spectacular! 🙂
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Wow, what a story! Yes, we too often forget the interconnectedness of all things – warriors in particular, but not only them.
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