An idle mind sits alone
stoic as its nature
it sits wandering with no aim
A preface to the devil’s workshop
It seduces the soul inside
The mind meditates on its decision
but considers all the outcomes
They range from despair to joy to suffering
In order to avoid suffering
ignorance comes to the rescue
It helps it forget its environment
and gives the mind the joy it needed
An endless fountain of joy
flowed from the fickle mind
The eyes tired as they are
put up a show of celebration
with happiness and ecstasy
as its players
the world became the stage
But like all shows of drama
conflict changed the character
The curtain call shook the mind
as it shattered the persona created
It came alive after all this while
Who it was deep inside
A giant ball of mess
inside a chaotic stoic mind

31 responses to “[117] The Battle Of The Idle Mind”
Great post
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Thank you! ✨
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Beautiful poem!
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Wow. Its an honour coming from you!
Thanks ✨
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Oh, shush! Thank you! Also, thank you for writing!
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Great writing.
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Thanks Bloke! If you’re called bloke, thats a great name ha
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Wonderful piece!
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Thank you ✨✨
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Idle mind is the devil’s workshop. 😊 nicely written!
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Thanks Bhavana ❤️
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It is a wonderful piece and I was drawn in…..but the second stanza, 6th line is awkward/clunky. All of the “its” cause me pause. I crave for different verbiage. Just a suggestion.
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Thank you so much 😀
I took your suggestion and changed it accordingly, please check and tell me if its better.
Keep the suggestions coming ❤️
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😉 that is a whole lot better. Great change up.
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Thanks for pointing it out!
Keep ‘em coming 😀
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good one boy! 😉
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Thanks Himanshu! 🙃
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Amazing write up👌👌
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Thank you for your comment ✨
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You’re welcome 😊
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Thanks for following my blog, Rahul. Your poetry is certainly thought provoking!
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Thank you Frank ✨
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Naked truth, beautiful lines!
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Thanks Jerri 😀
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A call to develop the skills of mind to master and guide ones own thoughts and thinking process for that will be one of the best ways to avoid being a fertile workshop for the devil. Nice one!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful. The thought changes the thinker. The act of thinking changes the thoughts of the thinker.
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This is beautiful
Check out my post on the mind
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Lovely post you’ve got there!
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Thank you so much
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