every time you leave
i wish it is a sunset
and i wait laying and lying
hoping you will return as a sunrise
harsh in your remembrance but
sweet in your memories
you tell me a story
that meanders through my mind as i
look at you curling your hair
with your fingers in a loop
a story that foretells my
ignorance even before
you catch me aloof
going down that spiral
you can’t follow me to
neither can I tell you its way
because I get lost in it too
then in the night
I tap into thoughts
darker than what surrounds me
to the point where I become it and
It becomes me
Then I wait for you
to return as a sunrise
with another story
another tale of my ignorance
Ooooh, nice one.
Thanks man ✨
oh I love the images in this!
and that I’m invited in but I don’t know the whole story – really like that – really clever!
Thank you for reading ✨
Beautiful. 🙂
Thanks Beckie ❤️
This is beautiful!
Thank you Arpita
I’m glad you liked it 🙂
Wow what a story that is yet not over, Rahul. Awesome picture and an apt poem.
Beautiful tale. A labyrinth of metaphors and emotions.
Enigma
Thank you so much!
Always waiting for you feedback
My pleasure!
!magery, emotions, intelligence. A gorgeous piece!
Thank you 😀
My pleasure!
This is spectacular!
Thank you Nandita ❤️
Great work man I love your name!!! “Smoke words everyday” it’s perfect.
Thank you!
Haha i’m glad you liked the name ✨
Brilliant!
Thanks man! I’m glad you liked it ✨
You are gifted!
Wow, that’s a huge compliment. Thanks for making me smile.