So focused on where I’m going
I forget where I am
Loneliness masked as solitude
Caught in a corrupt mind’s reverence
The evil masked as aspiration
I live under the devil’s imminent invitation
unconcerned and unperturbed
The nihilism and existentialism
soothe and caress my worries
but does it make them go away?
for that, I still worry
The downfall of the sun
sucks all the hopes away
Do I have to go to space now
to feel the sun’s ray
and a little bit of breathless
to instil the fear again
to add that fuel to the fire
and a time that just
stays
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So I am getting the sense that it is emotional. To me, personally, it sounds and feels shallow, but I know other people will have deep connections to it. Good job.
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Can you explain your reasoning? Would love to have some constructive feedback.
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Beautiful emotional poem and finding few answers in that stillness
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True! Thanks
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Wonderfully penned Rahul!
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I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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“The evil masked as aspiration
I live under the devil’s imminent invitation
unconcerned and unperturbed” 🤔🤔🤔
Anyway, amazing job, Rahul!!
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Thank You 😅
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Emotion packed in each and every words, Rahul. A great poem.
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Thank you Kamal! How have you been?
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Welcome Rahul, I am fine, how about you. I hope all good.
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how are you so good?
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You embarrass me 😛 Thank you
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“So focused on where I’m going
I forget where I am”
Relatable…
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I hoped it will be. Thank you Sarah 😀
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Nice poem. More philosophic than emotional!
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Appreciated Jerry 😀
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