So focused on where I’m going
I forget where I am
Loneliness masked as solitude
Caught in a corrupt mind’s reverence
The evil masked as aspiration
I live under the devil’s imminent invitation
unconcerned and unperturbed
The nihilism and existentialism
soothe and caress my worries
but does it make them go away?
for that, I still worry
The downfall of the sun
sucks all the hopes away
Do I have to go to space now
to feel the sun’s ray
and a little bit of breathless
to instil the fear again
to add that fuel to the fire
and a time that just
stays
So I am getting the sense that it is emotional. To me, personally, it sounds and feels shallow, but I know other people will have deep connections to it. Good job.
Can you explain your reasoning? Would love to have some constructive feedback.
Beautiful emotional poem and finding few answers in that stillness
True! Thanks
Wonderfully penned Rahul!
I’m glad you liked it ❤️
“The evil masked as aspiration
I live under the devil’s imminent invitation
unconcerned and unperturbed” 🤔🤔🤔
Anyway, amazing job, Rahul!!
Thank You 😅
Emotion packed in each and every words, Rahul. A great poem.
Thank you Kamal! How have you been?
Welcome Rahul, I am fine, how about you. I hope all good.
how are you so good?
You embarrass me 😛 Thank you
“So focused on where I’m going
I forget where I am”
Relatable…
I hoped it will be. Thank you Sarah 😀
Nice poem. More philosophic than emotional!
Appreciated Jerry 😀