She looks away from life
closer to the ocean
Thoughts of identity
Nibble at her feet
The tide turns heavy
Her mind turns light
She is consumed by the ocean
Goddess of insights
The boat invites a freedom
that she has been seeking
all this while
The pinks of her dress
turning darker every night
She looks in the ocean
ruminating for one last time
She finds all the answers
staring at her
in her smile

17 responses to “[253] Ocean and Its Secrets”
What a wonderful read as always!! π
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Thank you Roshni π€
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This is a lovely piece, befitting the accompanying artwork. I enjoyed this. Thank you ever so much for sharing. ^-^
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Thank for liking them Raheema β¨
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Very clever imagery. I like the thoughts nibbling at her feet!
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Thank you π Glad you like this one!
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its so lovely how insightful yet elegant this piece is. thanks for sharing
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Thank you Shayma. π€
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Beautiful πΊπΊ
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Thank you Sarika π
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Such a charming read – a fantasy to reality
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Thanks Shantanu π―
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My pleasure always
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Beautiful π
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Thanks Susanne π€
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It is beautiful, like always π
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