Plague my mind
with mysteries that offer
no delight
Call me out
on all the ignorant vices
I keep to keep my sense of self
Attention deficit
Distracted feelings
Overwhelming Living
I think of all the simple
things that we’re losing out
I fall before I jump
I speak before I think
out loud to all the empty seats
before the crowd can fill it out
Amazing…
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Thanks Manpreet!
This reminds me of that piece by Shakespeare, “All the World’s a Stage, and all the men merely actors…” etc.
In fact, I would call this a very brief, well written addition/companion piece to that. Kudos. This is a great write. ^-^
That’s a overwhelming comparison but i’ll take it :p
Thank you!
Nice read
Thanks!
lovely writing – the predicament well explained
Thank you Shantanu 🖤
My pleasure
You have expressed your thoughts well. I think I understand what you are trying to say. A great poem
Thank you!
Wow. Gimme some of your talent!!
Take it away. There’s not much left anyway 😛
Don’t say that!!! Be confident in the talent you have bc there’s a lot of it!!
Amazing!!
Thank you 🖤