Answers galore but
none that fit my cadence
Fragmentary focus of blinking eyes
I wake up a thousand times each night
I wish I was alive each time
Forgetful dreams full of insights while
traumatic nightmares fill my days
to only shake my momentary faith
and a shell that breaks
I drown
I’m under a wave
I’m up and I’m away
I levitate
I can smell the earth
I crash
I can burn the moon
I’m a walking contradiction
I’m the beginning but
only of my solar eclipse doom
I feel I am being repetitive to say that I like your poems: you really have a true gift to express what I can only express in French as “les états d’âme”
This means a lot Simone. The intention is to express les états d’âme and if i’m able to do that then it’s just great 🙂
Hard!! Intense! Am just struck for a moment after reading …thank you for this wonderful piece.
Thank you for reading Bhanu! 🖤
wonderful !!’
Thank you 😊
Beyond amazing
Thank you Ruchi 🙂
I love your writing! It just inspires me.
Aw thank you Sianne. I’m so glad it does 🙂
Wow…. I felt that.
Thank you. Glad you found it relatable 🙂 Hope you’re doing fine 🙂
Lovely !
Thank you Dakshali 🙂
Good stuff. Burning the moon would be quite a feat.
Won’t it right? Another sun at the end of the world maybe. Haha jk
Haha.
~you are a magical wordsmith~