I think about you just enough
for you to knock in my dreams
where we dance
inside cyclones and fiery storms
to descend inside
volcanoes that bloom like flowers
Why did we give all of us
to emotions that made us feel nothing
Did we want to touch the extreme of love
so bad that all we could ever give was
a mutual pain that you feel when you chase
anything excess
[338] Too Many Dreams

18 responses to “[338] Too Many Dreams”
Amazing
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Thank you ๐
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Brilliant poem! Loved it thoroughly!
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Thank you so much ๐
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Lovely. re-posted here: https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/08/21/338-too-many-dreams-raul-gaur-of-smoke-words-every-day/
Thanks for sharing your words. ๐
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Thank you for sharing ๐
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A thought provoking piece and I recently watched Requiem For A Dream and I havenโt clicked on a post this fast because of the featured picture haha. Such a great movie!
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Haha glad you did ๐ thank you ๐ค
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That’s one beautifully worded poem! Keep up the great work.
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Thank you so much ๐
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Captivating use of words!
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Thank you!
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Wow :’)
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Thank you Sanya ๐
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Painful
Yet, worth reading..๐
This is penned so well๐ฆ
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Thank you Akshita ๐
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