Contradictions crash around here
Hearing, an anomaly
Time finds a way of flying
when silence is forgotten
When it finds itself
on a planet of great divides
where attention is provided
to the clouds of the world
which rains information down
It sucks up the earth
It sucks up the human soul
like pain in a heartbreak
like colour from a painting
It renders it a doom of a
black and white starry night
with you all alone reaching out
for attachment that is lost
for a connection that is gone
[348] We’re All Alone
37 responses to “[348] We’re All Alone”
Beautiful Rahul.
Thank you Ashok 🙂
My pleasure Rahul 😊
So well said . Beautifully pennwd
Thank you for your encouraging comment 🖤
My pleasure 😇
This is such an amazing post.
Beautiful😍
Thank you Arati 🙂
So beautifully written💛🌼👍
Thank you for the encouraging comment 🙂
This really got me thinking. Love the way lines flow into each other. The artwork itself it beautiful.
So glad this spoke to you. Thank you!
The art is by František Kobliha just in case you wanted to know 🙂
You are so very welcome. Thank you for letting me know. Have a fantastic day.
Lovely words and rhythm 😇
Much appreciated 🙂
Great writing! 💞
Thank you Herl 🖤
Never Lonely Nor Alone
The ever-changing world is our home,
And the mind-body complex is the vehicle that we traverse by.
Never apart from it, we meet some of the countless possibilities
Which we are not apart from.
So, all is one, and one is all.
And we are at home–never lonely nor alone.
Dave.
This was so so good. Thank you David for your lovely comment that made me and everyone else think <3
When connections are lost, they were either meant to be connected for only a short time, or they have become neglected and need attention for reconnection. I like David’s take on it: “So, all is one, and one is all. / And we are at home–never lonely nor alone.” And I like your caveat, “when silence is forgotten” … yes, we need to revel in the silence to find our connections. Thank you for your thoughtful poem which made me become more thoughtful. <3
Yes for sure. Quite a good insight. Thank you for engaging with it 🙂
Beautiful and thoughtful poem especially relevant for the information-laden, confusing, isolating, time-period we are going through. Thanks also for stopping by and reading my Haiban.
I know right. Thank you Marsha for relating to it!
amazing work
Thank you Nancy. Means a lot 🙂
Beautifully written. It strikes a chord in my heart <3 Stay safe, Rahul:)
Than you. Glad it speaks to you 🙂
Beautifully penned, Rahul! Thank you for following Eugi’s Causerie II.
Thank you 🙂
I enjoyed reading. I especially liked the ending.
Thank you so much 😊
Dear Rahul Gaur,
I would like to resonoate with the spirit of your excellent poem with a song of the same title:
There is no link unfortunately :/
It is a YouTube video, which you can watch in my previous comment.
Found it by opening the page. My bad. Didn’t appear on the notification tab.
Dear Rahul,
I really love this song and used to play it frequently on my electronic organ. If you are curious to know how I sound, there is my playing of my own orchestration of “Clair de Lune” on my organ at https://soundeagle.wordpress.com/2020/10/10/if-my-name-were-moon-tonight-with-clair-de-lune/
Moreover, I hope that you will snap up the chance to watch my dynamic animation of “Clair de Lune” produced in high resolution (1920 x 1280) at the same post there.
The animation starts calmly and will gradually climax. The post also comes with my rhyming poem and musical performance. Please enjoy the animation on the big high-resolution screen of your desktop or laptop computer.