She speaks in fantasiesā£
upon the flights of realityā£
Earnest talk with a ā£
smile at the end to make it unrealā£
I know she wants to mean itā£
and make her dreams a realityā£
She needs someone to push herā£
Leap of faith awaits herā£
But she canāt find the energy ā£
inside her so she gazes outsideā£
to find me in the streetsā£
ā£
Our eyes lock ā£
Can we unlock the potentialā£
that the individual cannot seeā£
The relation between the twoā£
is nothing unless we are ā£
making each other learnā£
and unlearn our calamitiesā£
She waits upon a cliff ā£
and feels inability inside ā£
My words they speak into her eyes
to guide her into the lightā£
ā£
She finally believes in her potentialā£
and doesnāt feel my needā£
for me to go and nudge her
so I turn my back to feel ā£
We stand there in silenceā£
An abrupt noise creepsā£
She is falling and she is fallingā£
but she finally finds her feetā£
She is realised and she is rebornā£
taking her first flight of fancy
[415] Fantasy or Reality

42 responses to “[415] Fantasy or Reality”
Beautiful š„°
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Thank you š¤
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I like it. But what do you get out of the deal?
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Sometimes we should we fine with not getting something out of something. If it helps someone out, that’s enough š
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Agree.
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Amazing ā¤ļø
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Thank you š
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Well…š¤
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Beautiful creation.
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Thank you so much. š¤
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I love the first stanza. It is so real.
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Glad you liked it š¤
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Good writing and moonlight š š
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Thank you Siva š¤
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Very beautiful
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Thank you!
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That was a beautifull piece!!
But what do we take from it? I mean the end result or something?
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What we take is happiness of the fact that we helped someone else take ownership of their story and realised the way to fulfil their potential.
Thank you Khushi! What do you think about the end result?
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Well.. what I thought she was introspecting..like it was her inner self, her will that motivated her.
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Yes, you’re absolutely right there. You are a great reader!
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Thanks āŗļø
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Excellent! Loved it.
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Thank you!
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This is amazing, such beautiful writing š¤
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you Sheri š
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You’re very welcome. š
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Very nice
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Thank you Alex!
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By Godjust relates me until I don’t give any boy outside my window para just that!! Too good at writing you’re, I’ll definitely read your every work day by day indeed. Your poems are also one of the good things around (after reading I felt this). Well never stop writing.
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Get*
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And yes I’ve saved this like bookmarked it cuz I loved it too much so adding to my favorite list.
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Means a lot :ā)
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This poem speaks to me. I love it ā¤ļø
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Iām so glad it did š¤
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nice
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Thanks!
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