Future halts
when eyes desire
a glimpse of the past
There was no me
in the flow state of
hearing you be you
Now I carry my existence
to fill the cavity of you
Hedonistic tendencies
fill the spiritual void
There is awareness
but of my doomed state
There is tranquillity
but of being lost in melancholy
My hurt feelings hurt
who want to rescue
As I live for the chase
of capturing the fleeting
reproductions of my
eternal feelings for you
Still image from my upcoming short film ‘Nayan Tarse (Eyes Desire)’. Coming this month!
Smoke words every day. 
18 responses to “[481] My Eyes Desire You”
Oh wow! 🤧
This is a beautiful piece! Loved it ❤️
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Thank you Ahiri 🙂
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Wow Rahul, this piece is breathtaking. I always marvel at the flow and deep meaning you create…it’s just stunning! I especially love that first stanza, so powerful! And wow, you have a short film coming?!? I can’t wait!!! Keep shining, always 🖤🤗💫
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment! It will come in this month 🙂
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awestruck by every line as I progressed reading
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This truly means a lot!
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Such a beautiful poem, love your lines!
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Thank you!
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Oh my god! This piece has my heart 🤧❤️
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Thank you Hemalatha 🙂
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I actually loved your site description a lot! “Tumse na ho payega” sounds truly funny!
Loved your post a lot ❤😊✌
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Haha thank you. Glad you liked it!
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You are most welcome !! 😊😊
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Where is the movie premiering?
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On youtube!
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Wow, please share the link if you don’t mind, I’ll be glad to checkout.
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Lol💙. Link please
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