You fill me up with starbursts
of your disquiet
as
what you are, lives around the dark
it has a history of you
trying to search for a comfort of
a home, aimlessly
It survives behind the shadows
of all the misunderstood ones
It lingers at the border of my understanding
only to gently betray you by the closing of my door
I keep the details of my demeanour mysterious
to guide your energy away
Reluctantly, you fly from my field of view
just to knock at another
But eventually, it happens
You explode, just a planet away
All you remain to me
is a shooting star
that burned a little too much
only to never find its planet
or a way back home
❤❤ The last five lines… 👌👌
Thank you ❤️
You’re welcome 😃
Beautiful words so well composed Rahul
Thanks Kamal! Always a pleasure to hear what you have to say 😀
Welcome Rahul
All you remain to me is a shooting star ❤ this is so beautiful!
Thank you so much! Glad you found it beautiful 😀
Hey you saw this movie too? Kiminonawa ?
I did too😉
You had me at your blog header title, “Smoke words every day.” But this poem stopped me in my tracks. Love it! Thanks for sharing.
Haha thank you so much!