He slept on her side
But his mind was above
Like a cloud full of rain
Waiting to just burst
But he watched her go to peace
One of those rare times
While he simmered up inside
An effort to stay still
An effort to let this night by
He couldn’t understand
All the things she didn’t say
All the lies she didn’t speak
All the love she didn’t waste
All the nights of stormy looks
Turned to watching her in peace
While he simmered up inside
A cloud that could have burst
But decided to stay still
Just to let this night by
Very touching.
Thanks! 😀
Emotional. Touching. Heart warming. Beautiful.
You’re being kind. Thank you 😀
Beautiful!
Glad you liked it!
Wow!
Well, I’m glad it made you wow haha 🙂
Haha, really beautifully written 🙂
Thank you rose 🙂
nicely written
Thank you 😀
Splendid words so well articulated and so deep and poignant words. Great poem Rahul
Loved it <3
Thank you 🙂
Those efforts reflect in words
Thank you!
Can really read the frustration juxtaposed with peace, thanks for a great read.
Well, thank you 🙂
“He couldn’t understand
All the things she didn’t say,”
Are my favourite lines!
Thank you Sarah 🙂
Emotional turmoil …well penned
Thank you 🙂
There’s a lot of feelings in this. On the surface, it does indeed appear beautiful but reading the words, and the messages they try to hide, as the people in the poem, there is a sad truth. You have covered this very honestly in a manner, I’m sure, others can relate to. Well done!
Wow this made my day 🙂
Thank you 😁
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It is so so beautiful. Just amazing.
thank you so much for you comments. means a lot 🙂
My pleasure 🙃