Distorted voices play in reverse
The sound of my waking
comes in the form of a storm outside
Is it morning or is it night?
I can’t figure it out
My brain’s got me pinned down
Disorientation of my waking extends
throughout the day and melts into
the night of my irregular beating heart
Who would have thought that something as
normal as breathing will ask for attention?
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That feeling between sleep and awake… a totally disorientated time!
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Yes it really is. It’s like step in the other world.
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Oh, for sure, when natural things take unnatural turns, we have cause to ponder. What’s going on here?
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We do!
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Rahul, I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. Please do not feel obligated to participate.
If you are award free that is okay. If you do the award, please don’t feel pressured or rushed.
Do in your time and your way. And please let me know if you do so I may read it. 🙂
Sending a little of His Light your way and allowing others to see a link to your blog on mine. God loves you!
The link to your nomination is below:
https://gaillovesgod.blog/2018/11/26/versatile-blogger-award-11-22-18/
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Hi thank you! I really loved how gentle you are with your words. I won’t be able to share but I appreciate the gesture!
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PTL! I am so glad he allowed me the opportunity. Keeping writing! 🙂
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Breathing is important. Keep breathing!
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Ain’t that how we stay alive! Thanks 😀
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LOVED IT!
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Thank you Zaroya 🙂
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Interesting poem. The feelings of the body, lie submerged in poetic beatitudes. Anand Bose from Kerala.
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